And came a demon
By AJ O’Brien.
Travels Barbas
beneath ancient stars,
astride a horse crimson.
Black thoughts
bleeding into the mist,
screaming at the darkness.
Abaddon, the black-eyed demon
demands the souls of the dead,
so must he deliver.
With sword born of hunger
and set the task of death,
so must he slaughter.
Plead the old and young
mercy sweet mercy
as they are torn asunder.
One thousand souls
and be the demon free
too embrace sleep eternally.
And his quest goes on
beneath ancient stars,
astride a horse crimson.
Beautiful poem, Alan. It describes the demon well.
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Thank you very much. Appreciated.
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Abaddon is indeed an insatiable, hungry, demon…you captured his ferocity well in your poem.
July
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Thank you, July.
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My pleasure reading, Alan.
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Nice depiction
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Thank you.
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🙂
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So real I can see the demon flying through the dark sky towards … me? My bedroom? Ahhhh… Loved it, Muriel
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Many Thanks, Muriel.😃
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Oh, so true, Alan. The dance of the demon goes on and on. Brilliant poem!
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Thank you, Michele.
You’re very kind.
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Yes, sadly, his quest goes on and on! Terrific poem, Alan. You have a way of facing down scary truths in a way that actually makes us want to fight harder for goodness….. And that is a gift!
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Thank you so much, Ann.
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Wonderfully dark and descriptive, Alan. Your poem really resonates with me this evening—I just returned home from telling my nephew—who is in a coma dying of cancer—goodbye. He’s only 53, but death waits for no one. 🖤
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Thank you, Kathy.
I’m truly sorry to hear about your nephew.
As you rightly say, death waits for no one.🖤
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Thank you, Alan. You’re a good friend. 💕
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You are so welcome, Kathy.
I know what you are going through.
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😢💙
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Dark and eerie, awesome poem!
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Thank you very much.
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