Narcissus
By AJ O’Brien.
Sanctuary Oh sanctuary
hidden behind the eyes,
an empty pool of light
caught within a truth,
disembowelling hungry lies.
And he did bleed words
of hope and fear,
intoxicated by love of self
embracing his other,
within a reflection clear.
So sweet the kiss of another
Oh how the soul can roam,
but to love thy self
within a heart darkest,
one is sure to die alone.
Ein schรถnes Wochenende wรผnscht Wolfgang
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Thank you very much.
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Good work. Worth reading. There is something special about poetry when it is well done.
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Thank you.
You’re very kind.
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That’s such a profound piece! Amazingly constructed! ๐
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Thank you very much. ๐
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You’re welcome โบ๏ธ
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Excellent poem!
Many thanks for stopping by my Travel and Photography blog.
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Thank you.
And you’re so welcome.
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Yikes Alan, this sounds like our leader in the US, lol. You are brilliant.
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Thank you Michele.
You’re very kind.
Your President is visiting us tomorrow. ๐
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I’m sorry ๐ฆ
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Very intense. I was like, “Wow, whew…” damn, it struck me!
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Thank you very much.
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This is so thought provoking, and beautifully constructed!
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Thank you so much.
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My pleasure!
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My favorite so far.
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Thank you Val.
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Damn, youโre talented! This poem, this amazing poem, was worth the wait. Lately, I find myself clicking clicking clicking on your site, waiting for the next words you write. Youโre one of the good ones.
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Thank you so much for your kind words Andrew.
They are truly appreciated.
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Sad, but darkly lovely nonetheless. Well done, Alan. ๐๐๐
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Many Thanks Kathy. ๐
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My pleasure reading, Alan. ๐
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Fabulous ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Thank you Rita.
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You are welcome, My Friend ๐โค๏ธ
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nice!
perhaps a death by
misperception ๐
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So true.
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And what of life
when Narcissus walks
among men who reflect
only his intoxicated self image?
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Thank you so much.
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