It’s hot down here
By AJ O’Brien.
Captured by death
came at me from behind
the devil lay in wait,
stole my soul.
Man, am I in a bind.
Whispered a rancid demon,
Hear the Master’s word
you will be set aflame
and your pleas for death
shall go unheard.
You are kidding me
I’m really at a loss,
what did I do wrong?
I don’t belong down here.
Go get your boss.
You will burn for eternity
your soul be dammed,
the stench of your corruption
shall bring joy
to this unholy land.
You’re not listening to me, are you?
Incarcerated shadows 
I’m really enjoying your writing and especially the style! You are very talented, and I’m looking forward to following your blog! Cheers!
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Thank you very much.
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Amazing!
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Thank you so much RoseMarie.
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You’re quite welcome😊
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🦋 Well done!
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You’re very kind. Thank you.
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Brilliant!
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Thank you very much.
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Love it😃👍
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Thank you.
You’re very kind. 😊
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One can’t run away from a demon that captures you from behind. What a cheat the devil can be! Lol. I loved the fright and humor of your words, darkling Alan. Bravissimo!! xo
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Thank you very much my friend.
You say the nicest things. 💕
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A touch of humor with a little philosophical thought…nice read
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Thank you.
I appreciate your comments.
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Really good alan! I agree with the others–he probably was a politician because they are so clueless.
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LOL. Thank you so much Michele.
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Brilliant!
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Many Thanks.
You’re very kind.
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alway cool, blessings my friend
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Thank you so much.
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Ha! Funny and thought-provoking! I liked this one Alan…
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An awesome comment.
Thank you so much Ann.
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Thanks for the follow 🙂
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Love this 😀
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Thank you.
Your comment is much appreciated. 😊
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No one listens in hell either, huh? Maybe the demons are on their cell phones. 😁
I liked this, Alan…you stirred a healthy dose of humor into your usual dark brew.
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Many Thanks Kaddie.
You can’t beat a little bit of dark humour. 💀
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That is so… 😁
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For some reason, I suspect the protesting soul belonged in life to a politician (LOL).
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What a wonderful thought Anna. 😀
Thank you so much for your comment.
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It’s as hot as Hell on this planet we call Earth. I’ve often asked myself that same question: “What did I do wrong?” My first novel, yet to be published, was my attempt to answer that troubling question.
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Thank you very much.
And good luck to you with your first novel.
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